Small edits. Visible differences.

These examples show editing choices, not benchmark scores. Compare the draft, the suggested wording, and the details worth checking.

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Read the changes. Check the details.

Each example pairs a draft with an illustrative edit and points out what to review. Look beyond shorter sentences: who acts, when they act, and what they promise should still match the source.

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A clearer meeting update

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Original draft

We would like to inform you that the review meeting has been rescheduled to 14 October at 10:00 a.m. Please provide your comments by 12 October so that we can prepare the final agenda.

Illustrative edit

The review meeting is now on 14 October at 10:00 a.m. Please send your comments by 12 October so we can prepare the final agenda.

What to check: Meeting: 14 October, 10:00 a.m. Feedback: 12 October. The request is still for comments, not approval.

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A blog paragraph without the filler

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Original draft

The starter plan includes three projects and weekly exports. This provides users with the opportunity to manage a small portfolio in an efficient manner. It is important to note that additional projects require an upgraded plan.

Illustrative edit

The starter plan includes three projects and weekly exports, making it useful for a small portfolio. You’ll need a higher plan to add more projects.

What to check: Three projects, weekly exports, and the upgrade condition stay intact. These are fictional product details.

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A client follow-up without a new promise

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Original draft

I am writing to follow up on the estimate of $480 that I sent on Monday. I would appreciate it if you could let me know whether you would like to proceed. Please note that work will only begin after your approval.

Illustrative edit

I’m following up on the $480 estimate I sent on Monday. Would you like to go ahead? I’ll wait for your approval before starting work.

What to check: The quote is an estimate of $480. Work starts only after approval. Do not turn either point into a guarantee.

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A product description with useful limits

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Original draft

This shelf has been designed for indoor use and supports a maximum load of 2 kg. It is important to be aware that the power adapter is not included with the product.

Illustrative edit

This shelf is for indoor use and supports up to 2 kg. The power adapter is not included.

What to check: The 2 kg limit, indoor-only use, and missing adapter must remain visible.

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Instructions that stay in order

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Original draft

In order to restart the device, first disconnect it from the power supply. You should then wait for a period of 30 seconds before reconnecting it. If the light remains red, please contact support.

Illustrative edit

To restart the device, disconnect it from the power supply, wait 30 seconds, and reconnect it. If the light stays red, contact support.

What to check: Disconnect first, wait 30 seconds, then reconnect. Keep the conditional final step conditional.

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A cautious project update

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Original draft

We are currently aiming to release the update on 8 November. However, it is important to note that this date depends on the remaining tests. We will provide confirmation once testing has been completed.

Illustrative edit

We’re aiming to release the update on 8 November, depending on the remaining tests. We’ll confirm the date once testing is complete.

What to check: The date is a target, not a promise. Testing and confirmation are still pending.

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Give your next draft a clearer voice

Start with one paragraph. Keep the good parts. Make the rest sound like you.

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