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We would like to inform you that the review meeting has been rescheduled to 14 October at 10:00 a.m. Please provide your comments by 12 October so that we can prepare the final agenda.
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The review meeting is now on 14 October at 10:00 a.m. Please send your comments by 12 October so we can prepare the final agenda.
What to check: Meeting: 14 October, 10:00 a.m. Feedback: 12 October. The request is still for comments, not approval.
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